Today I am going to share with you a piece of writing that I wrote last year. It is about my trip to Rotorua. Rorotua is a beautiful place and I recommend you to go there some time. I even wrote the five w´s and the one h.
Here is my writing:
Where? Rotorua, New Zealand
What? We had fun and had some time out with each other
When? 08/07/2019
Who? My Brother Neal, My Mum, My Dad, And I
Why? For fun and we wanted to go there
How? By car
It was early in the morning, we were about to go to Rotorua. We went to Rotorua because we haven’t gone anywhere during the holidays. I was really excited. I was going to Rotorua with my mum, dad, my brother Neal, and I. We packed our bags and put it in our van. After we went to Rotorua at 7am. On our way to Rotorua we saw the Waikato river, goats, cows, horses.
Once we got to Rotorua my dad parked our van in the parking lot of Pohutu Lodge, and then he went to the reception to get the key of room 1. We went in and the first thing we saw was stairs on the right, a toilet right in front of us, and a room a few steps away from the toilet.
After, my mum and dad took all our belongings from our van so my brother Neal and I could take all our belongings upstairs and some bags downstairs. After when all our bags were inside the motel, we all went in, took our shoes off, and then we went to have some tea, barbecue, and some coke, we were also watching TV.
While my mum and dad were upstairs my brother Neal and I went downstairs to see what is in the room. When we stepped in the room then we saw a spa, two mirrors, TV, bed, draw, and a heater. When we saw the spa then we said to each other “When it is 7 o’clock we will go to the spa one by one”. I said ¨Yes!¨.
Me and my brother Neal went upstairs to do some things. Once the time was 7pm then we went downstairs with our parents to get the spa ready. My brother Neal and I decided that I will be going second and my brother Neal will be going first. When I went to check on my brother Neal when he was in the spa, I first knocked on the door, then I opened the door and saw so many bubbles and water.
After my brother Neal was out of the spa I told him “Can you stay with me when I am in the spa”? My brother Neal said “Yes”. We had dinner and went to sleep after a while. I said to myself ¨ I had such a nice day today.
The Next Day
The Next Day we woke up, Brushed our teeth and went to eat breakfast. While we were having breakfast we decided where to go today. We looked at the paper with places to go and decided to go to Wai - O - Tapu Thermal Wonderland and geyser park. After breakfast we went to Wai - O - Tapu Thermal Wonderland.
We got to Wai - O - Tapu Thermal Wonderland and went in. It was hot there. But I loved it. My favourite part was when there is wood on top of the very hot steaming geyser and you have to walk on it. It was so cool walking on top of some hot steaming geyser.
After that, we went to geyser park which had some funny geysers that looked like mud. They were boiling up and bubbling so much. We took photos and then went to our hotel. When we went back to the hotel Neal and I one by one went to the spa to shower. We went to sleep.
The Next day
We woke up and Brushed our teeth and went to eat breakfast. When we finished we packed our bags and went home.
Here are some pictures:
This was where we had to walk on
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