HI Fellow Bloggers,
Today was the first day for the Summer Learning Journey. For today's task we had to write a comment. We have to keep it positive, thoughtful and helpful. Also if it is PT and H (Positive, Thoughtful and Helpful) you get bonus points. Positive is when you say something nice of someones blog post. Thoughtful is when it reminds you of something. Helpful is when you help them improve their blog post. Here is a screenshot of my comment:
Thank you for looking at my blog. Comment down below. Have a good day. Bye
Mōrena Neha,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Charlotte and I am a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. I thought the quality comment you posted was awesome!
I really liked that you included a description about what a quality comment is! This is really helpful and lets the readers of your blog learn how to make quality comments of their own!
I noticed that you talk about musical instruments in your comment. What is your favourite instrument? I really like the piano and the saxophone, have you heard of these?
Don’t forget to submit the link to your comment using this form. .
Ngā mihi nui
Charlotte
Summer Learning Journey
Hi Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. I appreciate it. I wanted to have detail so people understand what I am saying.
Like I said before I want it to have detail or else people will comment on my blog and ask me to add more detail.
My Favourite instrument is the Ukelele and the flute. I have played the Ukelele before. I have played the flute only once.
I did submit the link to my comment using the form.
Thanks
Kia Ora Neha,
DeleteGreat job adding the detail into your comment! WOW, both the ukelele and the flute are amazing instruments! Do you take Ukelele lessons?
Ngā mihi nui
Charlotte
Summer Learning Journey
Kia Orana Charlotte,
DeleteThank you for the feedback! :) Yes they are very cool instruments. Flutes have a nice sound to them. No I don't take Ukelele lessons but at school my music teacher (Mrs Rai) taught us how to use a Ukelele. She told us what the c is using your fingers, F using your fingers and G7 using your fingers.
Thanks
Neha